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Reviews for ARAAT3: The Forbidden Experiment

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From ANON - McKnight on September 25, 2006
If Shadow represents Hell, and Ashura represents Earth, then whoever represents Heaven (if anyone) would be either Silver the Hedgehog or an original character.

Also, Black Doom was able to use Chaos Control, just like Ashura in this fic, and Shadow was still able to beat him.
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From ANON - Disaster Master on September 25, 2006
I just got back from the movie theater. I saw the movie: "Jackass: number two." And let me just say, that's got to be the most vulgar, stupid, insipid, disgusting movie I've ever seen! But it's funny as hell! Although, those of you with weak stomachs shouldn't watch it. I garuantee that you'll vomit. I'm serious, they do nasty shit in that movie. Chris drinks horse semen, Steve-O chugs beer into his ass, you know, stuff like that.

Ok, back on topic. I'm thinking Ashura is gonna kick all their asses. Good chapter though, chapter 15 score= 4 out of 5. Have a nice day!
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From ANON - BZLF on September 24, 2006
Finally, Eclipse is shown again. If you two do decide to have Ashura win, I'm gonna go out on a limb here and say Eclipse will somehow survive and destroy or just plain murder Ashura in the near enough future, depending on how you play it.
Thats only a guess.
Also, I really want to see some damn action take place! What'll happen when Shadow confronts Ashura? Will Shadow tap into the Chaos Emeralds powers while Ashura is monologing(sP?) about defeating him? And again, that dang Master Emerald. Even if Shadow does go super, will Mirage negate that power with the Master Emerald, considering what we saw in the first chapter?
I wanna see some asskicking. I hope another update happens so soon again(Before Mondays, I mean.)
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From AntwerpsRule on September 24, 2006
I really need to get controll of my activity cycle again..., I got so far behind I went and re-read this whole thing.
What the hell is Ashura trying to do? Does he just want to use the Chaos Emeralds in conjunction with the Master Emeral; or does he just want to ensure that they won't be used against him? He doesn't really need them to use his powers, unless there's some power you haven't shared with us yet. (most likley the second)
"Damnit Charmee thats my beer! Don't drink" That brought back memories. A friend of mine wrote up something he(?) called 'Charmee's drunk adventure', but never published it. Says he(?)'s too shy. Think I'll pressure him(? well, I'm only half sure) again.
0900-VECTOR IS COOL? 0900-832867-47-2665? I think I have a bit too much free time.
I'm just eating up the Shad/amy scenes. Everything to do about a young couple with unreasonable complications, and a baby. Just something that grabs me.
Shadow see's himself as Ashura's opposite? Wonder who the evil half is supposed to be, I'm serious. Being the 'nice' guy is a learned behavior.
Anyway, something tells me I'm on the verge of making an idiot out of myself, if I haven't done that already, so I'll be on my way.
Respectfully yours;
AntwerpsRule
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From ANON - H�ous on September 23, 2006
Oh, the heroes should win, but it should come at an incredibly high cost. Perhaps almost everybody, including Mirage, Ashura, Tails, Knuckles, Sonic, Shadow, Rouge, Amy, Vector, Charmee... except for Espio. He should live and then have to bear the burden upon which their victory was won. Probably won't happen, but that would be an awesome ending to such a great trilogy.
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From ANON - RAW19 on September 23, 2006
but i liked the sex! ah well, i also enjoyed the Angel Island Brawl. though Mirage does have kind of an unfair advantage with the Chaos Tempest. otherwise they were pretty equal in strength and it would of been a toss up of who won. is there any particular reason why she can't use the 'Tempest' on Ashura?
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From ANON - Disaster Master on September 22, 2006
Chapters 12, 13, 14 score= 4 out of 5. I'm awaiting the showdown. Have a nice day!
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From ANON - BZLF on September 18, 2006
Well, a bit short, but eh, an updates an update.
I don't much like the fact you've got Mirage set up to die, but if thats how you want it, so be it. Would it be possible to Chaos Control, not just distance, but through time, if one had all the Emeralds?
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From ANON - funkman on September 16, 2006
I believe the fuse has been lit. Soon, the explosive, action-packed, head-spinning events will knock your socks off. Although we readers must wait more time for that. My view of ARAAT3 has changed completely. When I read the first chapter, I thought it was going to be one of those stories where the OC is the whole story. Where the OC is the perfect character, strongest character, smartest, best-looking. The kind where it gets annoying. Know what I mean? Now you HAVE been using Mirage a lot, but you've made it where it's cool, not annoying. I changed my mind about the story ending. Don't ever pay any attention to me if I say anything like that again, I'm an incompetent idiot. You know what you're doing. Congrats on a job well done. Later!
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From ANON - Mlz23 on September 16, 2006
Woohoo! no more sex! i mean, it's okay to add into fics such as these but i myself am a non-stop action type of person. =] i love this fic alot. keep up the good work!
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From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on September 16, 2006
Um? How am I never satisfied? That's not kool man, not cool. But on to the thingy.
Wait, I got nothing, it's all pretty good, save for a few things, that I dun remeber from 2 minutes ago because my brain has been fucked over by some wierd ass movie. So I'll leave you with these parting words...

That's great I'm done, where's my chicken wings!?
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From ANON - BZLF on September 09, 2006
Hmm.. Seems Ashura has a need for control. Need to dominate over others.
If the Master Emerald was broken into pieces and those pieces scattered throughout the Earth, or even universe, would that negate Mirages abilitys over Shadow? I'm glad to see the plot is moving on again, and I am looking forward to the next update, for both here and Bloody Domination.
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From ANON - CrazyIvan(notloggedin) on September 07, 2006
So is this how you do things? I mean honostly, sex again already? In a piece of work that is well written, sex at every corner just hampers the story line, unless you can write it well enough to carry along. and you my friend, have done just that. Kudos to you for your writing expertise.

Honostly as for how Mirage acted during afore mentioned sex, it was comepletely out of her normal character ways.
You have to make up your mind, she is either cold hearted, and effective like a machine, or has the same flaws as everyother mortal being. I assume you're having her start out rough and tumble, but then her front will crumble as she falls in love? Well, it's been done before, but hopefully you'll be able to pull it off with aplom.

As for Mr. Green hedgehog, I assume you'll leave him with the machine like character personality. However, it would be interesting if you have chosen a path not much taken, where the antagonist succums to mortal flaws.
It would be very interesting if he fell under prey of his own nightmarish powers. But since you most likely have everything already planned out, I don't see how this suggestion would help.

Well, I've left a long enough review, this isn't really my style, but the story just compelled me to review as a true reviewer/ critique. Good luck and godspeed. This is CrazyIvan signing off for now....
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From kittynakajima on September 05, 2006
It's been awhile since I reviewed this lovely story, so I thought I'd do so while I still have a spare moment.

The whole Mirage/Espio thing sure sounds like it'd make for an interesting relationship. Sex, beat each other up, then have great makeup sex. Who wouldn't want a relationship dynamic like that?

I know I would/do.

And their second love scene was rather creative - bet it educated some people of one of the many uses an extremely long tongue can have. :D

Also, as this latest chapter was the last 'happy' chapter as you call it, I can only wonder if this means we'll soon be finding out where the hell Rouge ended up with Ashura in the previous chapter. I know it's probably not anything good, and given your portfolio, I can expect something seriously sick and twisted.

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From ANON - funkman on September 04, 2006
So....from here on is where it gets good eh? Will the next chapter have the 'head-spinning' event I've been waiting for? Hope so. Even if it doesn't, I know it'll be a good chapter. Later!
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