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Reviews for Veil of Twilight

By : ericblaire
  • From ANON - Ryan on October 16, 2015
    This is a well thought out story, though im hoping to maybe see midna with wolf link, it has always been a favorite idea of mine
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  • From ANON - mbj on January 17, 2014
    wow. Love the story
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  • From ANON - Hyrulesman on September 18, 2013
    Man Best work for a zelda fanic i read The humor the story and just everything is great
    to You i solute and may your writing get even better
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  • From ANON - JBails on August 23, 2013
    It's been a long time since any updates from you, but I still hope this story will be finished.
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  • From ANON - Waffleface on August 09, 2013
    This is very good: surprising premise, and your intergration of LoZ elements from more games than just TP make this better than just a novelization of the game itself. The Great Fairy being, well, evil seemed kind of random, and at times it can feel like you're shoving non-TP elements, such as Vaati, Dark Link, and Romani...but most of the rest of it was great.
    The fights, the characters, the humour, the sex...most of this is good. You could work on describing locations, battles, and character appearances more: if I didn't know what Midna's true form looked like, I'd have no idea from the description or lack thereof. Going off of his, I had no idea where the Armogohma fight took place, and the yeti fight itself seemed rush, as did some of the other instances. The yetis could have had a bigger role besides voiceless characters, and Link seems a little...well, weak at times.
    It's a cool idea, killing Stallord with grinding gears, but that required application of his own actual skill: just his ability to move a platform. Most of your lemons could also use a little clarification: I needed to reread most of them to get a mental image in my head as to the positions of the characters.

    Be this as it may, good work. Take a look at what I mentioned and this should be an even greater story than it already manages to be.
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  • From Goldenfoxs on July 15, 2013
    Amazing, Keep it going.
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  • From ANON - DerianArdor on June 07, 2012
    Just been really enjoying your stories. Welcome addition on sleepless nights. I love midna probably my fav character of any series and I feel you got her down just right. I hope you decide to finish this story. It is tantalizingly good takign me away from my current book game of thrones.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 18, 2011
    Well, that sucks. The story isn't finished, and by the looks of the last update, it may never... Well, it was good while it lasted, and hopefully you will update again.
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  • From ANON - Dark09 on January 31, 2011
    My first review on here xD. I've just started reading your 2 Zelda fic's the last few days and I must say I'm really enjoying the twists and additional suspense. Blood great job so far, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :-)!

    Keep up the great work!!
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  • From goldenlady88 on December 31, 2010
    i love your fan fiction and this one is great! please write more soon! your fan fictions are actually helping me be inspire dot write mine. keep up the good work!

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  • From ANON - Nanya on December 02, 2010
    Well, this story gets more and more interesting with each chapter.

    Poor Midna, getting knocked like that.

    Hope things end up better for them in the future.

    MidnaxLink FTW! :D

    Hope that the next chapter doesn't take long.
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  • From ANON - Max on October 28, 2010
    Nice to see an update, and I liked the description leading into the reveal on the mask (though I'm pretty sure we all knew which one it was).

    As always, keep up the good writing, it's always nice to see more of your work.
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  • From fantome1 on October 23, 2010
    Brilliant as always, but I feel so sorry for Illia when she finds out.. (sad sigh).

    Your loyal fan,

    Dave
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  • From ANON - JB on October 20, 2010
    It's about time!!!That took forever!!!!!
    But I liked it.
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  • From ANON - Max on August 25, 2010
    Been a while since I've been around, but I really like the Ganondorf/Zelda thing so far.

    Story stays interesting, thanks for the work.
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