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Reviews for Bloody Domination (Revised)

By : Breech_Loader
  • From ANON - Maniacal Mercury on December 27, 2006
    Tails is 8 years old! :o
    Him getting fucked is not a good thing!
    .........Unless he consents of course! ^.^
    You have to be gentle! :(
    ::continues cuddling poor Tails::
    Anyways, still an awesome story despite this chapter XD
    Can't wait to read more and I shall pray to whatever diety there may be if any that are listening Tails is rescued before Shadow murders him ;_;
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  • From ANON - Weasel on December 26, 2006
    Meh, a little disappointed. I was hoping Shadow would attempt to be good and still have everyone hate him at the same time, but there's still time for that, I suppose. Tails being fucked is always good.
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  • From ANON - Maniacal Mercury on December 25, 2006
    ::cuddles and rocks poor Tails::


    ;_;
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  • From ANON - BLOWJOBMAN on December 24, 2006
    WOW. JUST WOW.

    THIS STORY IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN THE FAGGOTRY FEST THAT YOUR OTHER STORY IS. I MEAN, IN THAT STORY, IT TURNED INTO A SHIT-HEAP AS YOU TWO BROUGHT IN YOUR SHITTY FAN CHARACTERS. BUT YOU STICK TO THE CANON IN THIS ONE, AND IT WORKS BETTER THAT WAY.

    ALTHOUGH I DESPISE QUEERING IN ALL OF ITS FORMS, I FEEL THAT TAILS EARNED IT. THAT LITTLE FAGGOT HAS BEEN PARADING HIMSELF AROUND FOR TOO LONG, AND IT REALLY PISSED ME OFF. HE ALWAYS SOUNDED LIKE HE HAD A COCK JAMMED DOWN HIS THROAT, TOO, SO I GUESS IT'S ONLY APPROPRIATE THAT HE GETS IT UP THE ASS. LITTLE COCKSUCKER DESERVED IT.

    THAT SHITHEAD KNUCKLES ALSO EARNED IT. HE DID NOTHING IN THE CANON EXCEPT BITCH ABOUT SONIC AND ASK MEN TO FUCK HIM UP THE ASS. IT'S NICE THAT HE FINALLY GOT HIS WISH, ALTHOUGH HE TOOK IT LIKE A LITTLE BITCH AND CRIED. HE WAS ANOTHER STUPID FAGGOT WHO DESERVED WHAT HE GOT.

    AND THE PORTRAYAL OF SHADOW WAS TO A FUCKING TEA. IN THE CANON HE'S A LITTLE EMO CUTTING BITCH WHO CRIES WHEN LISTENING TO CELINE DION AND TALKS ABOUT "CUTE BOYS", BECAUSE HE ENJOYS DISHING IT OUT TO MEN. IT'S SO FUCKING APPROPRIATE THAT HE STARTED CRYING LIKE A LITTLE BITCH WHILE FUCKING TAILS IN THE ASS. ALL HE HAD TO DO WAS START CUTTING UP HIS WRISTS AND IT WOULD BE ABSOLUTELY PERFECT.

    BUT THERE WAS ONE THING THAT REALLY MADE THIS STORY SO FUCKING GREAT: RAPE. RAPE IS THE MOST FUCKING MANLY THING THERE IS ON THIS PLANET. IT'S THE ONE THING THAT MEN HAVE PERFECTED THAT WOMEN WILL NEVER BE ABLE TO. IT'S IMPOSSIBLE FOR A WOMAN TO RAPE A MAN ANYWAY, AND ANY GUY WHO GETS RAPED BY A WOMAN SHOULD SURRENDER HIS BALLS AND GET A SEX CHANGE OPERATION, BECAUSE HE'S PRETTY MUCH A LESBIAN ALREADY.

    IN FACT, ALL OF MY SEXUAL EXPERIENCE COMES FROM RAPE. CONSENTUAL SEX IS FOR MEN WHO ARE CLOSET HOMOSEXUALS, AND "MAKING LOVE" IS FOR LESBIANS, SO ANY GUY WHO DOES THAT MIGHT AS WELL START WEARING DRESSES AND MAKEUP. LAST TIME I COUNTED I'M WANTED IN 10 STATES.

    SHIT, I HAVE TO SPEED. THE FBI HAS TRACED MY IP TO A CYBER CAFE IN MILWAUKEE AND ARE ON THEIR WAY. BYE-BYE NOW, THANKS FOR SHOWING ME THAT NOT ALL OF YOUR WRITING IS SHIT.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on December 18, 2006
    I knew it was to easy for you two to have Shadow be defeated for good this chapter. I look forward to whatever y'all have planned for Tails. I hope it comes down to Super Sonic and Super Shadow in the final chaper.
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  • From Weasel on December 15, 2006
    Awesome stuff. Write more. Soon.
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  • From ANON - Maniacal Mercury on December 12, 2006
    Ahhhh so the truth is finally spilled. No matter which Shadow prevails its gonna be great to see.
    But hasn't Tails been staying with Sonic ever since the phone calls started happening? o.O
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  • From ANON - Jello Biafra For President on December 12, 2006
    I will start working on the MST when this is finished, just got to figure out how to send it to you.

    I was really expecting sonic to beat the fucking shit out of Shadow.
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  • From ANON - BZLF on December 12, 2006
    Well well well. Having Amy get pregnaut with Shadows kid. I'd critisize you two for that if I gave a damn. Just good to see another update. I really don't think Shadow can be forgiven or saved at this point unless y'all split him into two different beings--Ark Shadow, and Evil Shadow.
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  • From ANON - Mistress Bella on December 11, 2006
    Hmmm. I'm not exactly sure what to make of the latest chapter. I'll reserve any and all comments about Amy getting pregnate until the next chapter, as this could go so many different ways, given Shadow's current state.
    Though I did love this chapter. Sonic wanting to help Shadow, even after finding out what he's done is sweet of him. Knuckles is the same hot headed (reasonably so) lovable idiot that we know him to be. (You do him very well). Tails has mysteriously, stayed absent out of the story--where is the Sonic humping Kit--I mean...Miles anyway?
    Though: is this going to become a Sonic/Shadow story? That could be interesting...if neither gets killed that is.

    ~Bella Malfoy
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on December 11, 2006
    I'm annoyed Amy got preggers. Are you seriously going to have Shadow repent then end up with Amy when this story is *seemingly* about well...his so called hatred for Sonic? Seriously?

    Though this chapter was funny. I love Knuckles and the "HotY" line, that was just great. And I'm happy it finally got an update--I can't wait to see what happens next...I think. And what ever shall happen to
    Tails? ::huggles::
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  • From ANON - Disaster Master on December 11, 2006
    Meh, Amy's pregnant. I liked the chapter though. I give it 4.5 out of 5. I give Amy's pregnancy a 1 out of 5. Lookin' forward for more, and I'm glad you found a replacement for Terminus.
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  • From ANON - anon on December 08, 2006
    If you dare finish this without involving Tails, well i may just have to find you and...
    But seriously take your time and everything.
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  • From ANON - Jello Biafra For President on December 07, 2006
    Im Working on a MST of this soon.
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  • From ANON - GoGoGravityMan on December 07, 2006
    yaaaaay! shadow is startin to turn nice! repent! i like this story and its good to see some... well, goodness! what with all that brutal rape. UPDATE!
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